I didn't realize that when I posted my video in the other topic it was exclusively for certified coaches to respond, I sorta missed that. As much as I look forward to their input I would also appreciate input from any non-coaches as well. Fresh eyes are fresh eyes regardless of which head they are in. I will thank you to keep the critique on topic regarding technique, not the bowling alley or the goofs in the adjacent lanes etcetera etcetera. I'm seriously looking to get to the top of my game so I'm looking for helpful suggestions.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-Vessw0IQak